Week 3 Story: The Fisherman with One Hand
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Jesus arrived at the coast later that day. Seeing the disciples sitting in the sand, He asked Paul to come forward.
“Why do you sit here in silence?”
Paul answered and pointed to the fisherman. “All day, that one-armed man has walked around through the waves, setting and unsetting his net. Even when the sun was at its highest, he continued to fish, though of course most of them were gone.”
Jesus looked around at the disciples and was grieved at their amazed eyes. “Do you only cast your nets when the sun is low and the shade is over? Would you stay home from the docks if your leg was hurt and in a wrap? Look at the baskets he has collected on the sand. Are those not the same fish that you pull into your own nets? If you fished with the same devotion and strength that he does with one hand, imagine the size of your catch with two.”
Author's Note:
This is a story loosely based around The Man with a Withered Hand, in the 3rd chapter of the Book of Mark. In the story, Jesus heals a man who only has one working hand. This is done in front of a group of Pharisees who were insulted that Jesus was "working" on the sabbath. To be honest, my story does not share the same message that is in Withered Hand. In the original, Jesus is teaching about the importance of actions and their value over "rule-following." In my story, I just wanted to write a parable that had a message that lined up with other parts of Mark. As I had noted in my reading notes for the week, I wanted to tell part of the story/message through the words surrounding the dialogue, in addition to the words themselves.
Bibliography:
Mark 3:1-7, Harper Collins Study Bible
I like how you started this one with a little bit of a mystery - who are "they" that are arriving on the beach? It made me think a little harder about the context. I would have been really curious to know a little more about the disciples and what they're doing at the beach! Or who the man is - do they talk to him? What would he say?
ReplyDeleteI think the author's note definitely helped me understand the background - it would be interesting to see that incorporated into the story somehow.
Carl,
ReplyDeleteI think its great how you only loosely based your story on the original! It brings in more creativity in what you are trying to tell. Your set up and descriptors were fantastic. I could really feel the heat that exhausted all the others but not the one armed fisherman.
Hi Carl! I think it's awesome how you experimented with the original story to bring something new to the table but still preserving the original. Your descriptions and details were very great, and I was very interested throughout! Great job!
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